March 19, 2018

Cirrus clouds creep across the twilight sky.
Polar opposites collide.
Snow–

Vernal equinox, notwithstanding.

 

3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Joy Bakken
    Mar 19, 2018 @ 21:31:51

    Lovely poem. Every word so carefully chosen to keep this piece tight. Great slice!

    Reply

  2. franmccrackin
    Mar 19, 2018 @ 22:43:48

    I agree- every word important.
    I also like the motion in the first 2 lines- slow, then pow.

    Reply

  3. ureadiread
    Mar 20, 2018 @ 22:53:48

    Notwithstanding, indeed! What a tasty morsel of a slice.

    Reply

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