Weary

Imagine how I felt when I received Maggie’s story a few days ago. Maggie will be five in a few weeks.

She wrote: Maggie was skipping along on the tall grass. She stepped in a muddy puddle. The weary wind was rushing by.

How does an almost five-year-old know the weary wind?

Pure magic.

Maggie, February 2020

8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Betsy Hubbard
    Mar 04, 2020 @ 22:30:11

    Oh my heart just bursts when I see little writers do things that amaze and delight! What a wonderful description.

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  2. writingandlaughing
    Mar 04, 2020 @ 22:32:46

    This is so sensorially strong, I love it! The muddy puddle, the rushing and weary wind, the tall grass… I can feel it all. Thanks for sharing this gem!

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  3. eddiehren
    Mar 04, 2020 @ 22:40:21

    Wow. Love it. The magic that comes out of them sometimes sure is remarkable. Thanks for sharing this – sounds like someone has a shot at doing something one day with words! Always great to see!

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  4. Fran McCrackin
    Mar 04, 2020 @ 22:45:56

    What a wonderful line! Truly a small moment to capture. Who knows, she may include your piece and photo in her book talks as an adult author!!
    (Does her grandmother perhaps read her poetry?)

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  5. Suzanne Richardson
    Mar 05, 2020 @ 16:02:13

    Wow, that is beautiful! I am sure we will one day read her published work.

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  6. Fran Haley
    Mar 05, 2020 @ 18:56:37

    So much is packed in these short lines. “Weary wind” -! Children are instinctively poetic. My new granddaughter, age 4, said: “I was crying with my blue eyes.”

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  7. sallydonnelly11
    Mar 08, 2020 @ 10:16:41

    I think she knows because she knows you, a grandma and a poet!! It’s in her genes!! Keep encouraging her as a writer!

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  8. mbhmaine
    Mar 09, 2020 @ 05:09:42

    Oh, this makes me miss writing with young ones! How beautiful!

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